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Topic： Its the only way to improve the satety on our roads that give much strict punishment to driving offence.Are you agree that?

[特别注意]题目问的是：你赞同还是反对——提高道路安全的唯一途径是严惩驾驶违规行为。如果你赞同，你就必须证明严惩驾驶违规行为是唯一途径；如果你反对，则要证明严惩驾驶违规行为不是唯一途径。注意审题，不然很容易偏题。我的立场是赞同。

IDEAS：
1.正是因为处罚轻，使得违规驾驶的肇事司机丧无视他人生命及安全，只有严惩，才能防止违规驾驶，确保道路安全。论据：2004年中国大中城市交通事故报告显示：事故原因有80%由违规驾驶所致。大多数司机的安全意识很淡薄。
2.近年来政府加大交通安全的宣传力度，但收效甚微，违规驾驶现象高居不下，只有严惩才能起到杀鸡杀儆候之效
3.以新加坡为例，法律严明，交通事故率极低。

The issue of how to improve the safety on roads has always been the focus of much attention.people come up with various solutions,but some emphasize that the only feasible way is to give strict punishment to driving offence.Personally,I share these peoples point of view.

It is much lesser punishment that makes those hit-and-run drivers devoid of the reverence for other peoples life and close attention to road safety.---topic sentence An authoritative traffic analysis reporting indicates that approximately 80% of traffic accidents result from driving offence which occured in large and medium cities in China during the second half of 2004, and the rest of traffic accidents are due to bad weather and poor quality of automobile. These statistics show that most automobile drivers lack the consciousness of safe driving.They deserve severe legal punishment.Only after stricter punishment is carried out can driving offence decrease.

In recent years,the Chinese government intensify efforts to publicize safe driving and traffic rules by the mass media(i.e. TV and radio, newspapers,magazines).But that has very little effect on reducing driving offence.Therefore,its time to beat the dog before the lion! Only strict punishment can play a role of a serious warning to those reckless drivers.

Take an Asian country Singapore for instance.Singapore is well-known for its extremely stric trffic law worldwide.Those who break the traffic rules must be severely punished.Without the supervision of traffic police，an extraordinarily low rate of traffic accidents has been kept for years,which totally attributes to local peoples following the traffic rules.

Undoubtedly,improving the unsafe traffic situation is the most vital thing these days.I firmly hold the view that giving strict punishment to driving offence is the unique practicable solution.

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